Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Another Quick Transcription of Sanders Mss.


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Mon Jun 12

Up at 6. Thought it rained in night – sound of brook next to camp ground, Woke up to utterly clear skies. The water is Fall River – bridge crosses it at campground – we went up to sit, liten to the roar.
            Coffeecake breakfast. Tension with Jesse almost from outset- rove to trailhead for walk up Cow Creek to Bridal Veil Falls. Had trouble finding trailhead, worrying (I was) if we could make hike + still get to raft rendezvous on time. Also nervous about

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Rafting. Gorgeous hike across open meadows with aspen groves – greenish bark, brilliant lime-green new bursts of leaves – glowing in sunlight. All the way to falls, I felt good, strong, in touch, though of essay , about how Jesse + I experience land differently. For him it is test, physical challenge, pitting his juice against power of country. So he’s drawn to lan’s power – stone, mountain,

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waterfalls, size/distance. I’m more interested in land’s texture, details – wildflowers, butterflies (tiny deep blue ones over much – several dozen), birds. He wants to move, push twd destination; I want to savor details. In harmony up to Bridal Veil Falls – we both thrummed to power of it. On way back, argued over whether we should camp alone tree-line, in snow. He truged ahead, cut off from me. We had furious, showboy

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Argument in car on way to rafting – I scarcefly saw the gorgeous, rocky cavern of Big Thompson River. He insisted on my being out of touch with him – then, key complaint, my gloom, dark view of world. Gave me much thought.

Rafting --> see p. 29

            Elk chasing coyote at dusk – as we rove from ranger station to camp. Cooked supper after 8, much tension broken by rafting. Lost my jeans!
            Full moon- broken clouds. Gorgeous moon all night – tent flap open. Bed at 10.

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Rafting (from p. 24).
Jesse reserved spaces for “Wild + Scenic” 12-mile (2-3 hour) trip down Poudre River (pronounced poo-der) with A-1 Wildwater Adventures, out of Estes Park. We rendezvoused n. of Estes Park. Drove in van to put-in and river we were passing looked murderous. I really wondered about wisdom of this – and, as in Boundary Waters, my strength. Guides played

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Up dangers – but there had been two flipped rafts already this young season; and during journey – Jesse + I in front, one guide and a guide-in-training in middle, and young, new (it turned out to be his first trip with customers, after about two weeks of training!) small, very wiry (no fat when his T-shirt was off) Eric in rear guiding _ steering _ calling out orders:

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Forward Paddle, Back, Stop, Left, Right and Jum (toward object, to keep raft from capsizing). Put in – practiced commands. I was guide lead paddler (left front) first half; I switched to let Jesse do it second half, when we stopped for a break. Once in raft, after a few tense minutes, I relaxed – we seemed invulnerable, sliding over rocks + rocking through waves (some were at least 3’ tall). A number

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Of local people to whom we der described our plans though we were mad to ride 12-mile trip on Poudre in this high, tumultuous water. Guides enjoyed it. We were kept busy, aler with our paddling – but I glanced at the impressive stony banks, bluffs, cliffs; an I kept watching Jesse, who was glowing with pleasure. He really dug in hard on the

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Paddling, making as much of a struggle out of it as he could. But it was a struggle – the guide was worn out, and even the observer-guide + trainee looked ready to quit. It took us 2 ½ hours. Crossed through scene where they were shooting ep TV episode of Texas Ranger – we got to see Chuck Norris’s double glide across the river on a cable. Many trailers, contrivances + people spread along both

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Banks and even in river. One officious man with whistle waves us to hurry past – and all guides were indignant.
            Wonderful bucking, twisting of raft as it hit waves, rapids, cascades. I felt excited, but alo oddly serene in midst of tossing, bursts of spray renching me. We wore helmets, wet-suits over shorts + T-shirt (my ASLE

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 shirt, carrying my name downstream!), life preservers, I went barefoot wore my shoddy boat shoes w/out socks – they were instantly soaked. (They’re still wet clanorig? Tues. night as I write these notes – but my boots, after snow-shoeing are sodden). Not aware of cold, thanks to sun + wet suits. Woman driver – Shawna, in cut off jeans + white bra-top + deep tan – kept watching for us

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From various spots down on shore as we bucked + rocked + glided downriver. My joy was more than doubled by watching Jesse.
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Thoughts for essay on walking/rafting/camping/snowshoeing in mtsn with Jesse:
1.     He’s testing himself; to see what he’s made of, what he’s capable of.
2.     All young men have need of test, feel

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their juice. Where are older men to teach them, to channel this energy + will into socially – useful forms?
3.     We don’t need knowledge of land in order to survive. It’s not a life-or-death matter (in human short run) that we know land, be observant. Without life-or-death, how make the land-knowledge matter? How enforce behavior w/out taboos, rligious/spiritual

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4.     Recall my own teenage feeling of my juices – running in woods – trying it barefoot (my feet bleeding).
5.     Jesse wants to do what is physically hard – whitewater rafting, snowshoeing, backpacking, rock-climbing, mountaineering. I want to do what is intellectually, spiritually hard.
6.     Recount our dialogue: “Dad, what bothers me the most

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Is how you see the world – problems everywhere, angry at people for all their destruction + waste. It depresses me to see the world as ruined. I’m young. I want to believe there is hope.”
            So do I- for Jesse’s sake and for mine, for the world’s.
7.     Take off from Wallace Stegner’s view of the American West as “the geography of hope,” and why he later

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Fri. June 9
To Jesse    40.00
Lunch           9.00

Recanted or modified that view.
8.     I can take the occasion of the hike as way of writing about need for hope, and where I find it in the land ,in human knowledge (skills that bring us here), in materially simpler life.

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            (our time here savoring the minimal things) in hard-won community between Jesse and me, in comradeship with other journeyers. In other words, the Colorado trip becomes a frame on which I can hang the various sources of hope – and search for hope is impelled by Jesse’s condemnation of my dark view of the world. If at the same time,

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I can make this a study in the Colorado Rockies, it could serve for American Landscape.
9.     Camping is a reminder of how little we truly need- Thoreau’s search for the essentials.
10. Layers in essay:
a.     Father-son
b.     Rocky Mtn journey
c.      Search for grounds of hope
d.     Young man’s initiation
- what world do I want to give him? (Problem of ecological despair.) 

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